Kristin's "When Sally Fell
In"
In this story,
is "coat",
is
"ice skate",
is "polar bear", and
is "barn".
One day Sally asked if she could go to the ice pond. Yes
Sally, said mom. So she went to the pond with her dad.
They went ice skating, but when they got on the ice, Sally fell
in the water. Dad threw a rope and saved her. So they went home.
A very hungry, very large
was watching them. The
jumped out. He scared Sally and Dad. Sally said, He looks
mean! So they ran. Dad saw a
. Lets
go in the
, said Sally. So they ran in. Look
Sally a
. Can I wear it? asked
Sally. Yes, Sally said Dad. This is scary.
Lets go! said Sally. So dad looked outside. The
was not in sight, so they went home. Mom, mom said
Sally, I saw a
. What! said
mom. I saw a
!
The End
Story by: Kristin, age 8
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