Tesa's " Mom`sTHat will Never Forget"

In this story,

is "Magic Blanket",

is "Purfect Picture",

is "rollin` wagon", and

is "tiny t.p. ".

Once upon a time my mom and her bestest best friend decided to go to egept. My mom`s best friends daughter was my friend. We got to stay at her grandma`s.

Then my mom pack up her stuff and so did my friend`s mom. My friends drived all of us to the airport to go to egypt, we went with them to say by.

We went back to her grandma`s. It`s been three days, then they sended us a postcard it said:

Dear, Tesa and sandra

we miss you very much

we have to ride in a

and if we get cold we will cover up with a

We got something for you.

We got to go

bye love,

your mothers.²

we gave it to sandra`s grandma then we went outside. There was a mean black shephard dog staring right at us then it started running rite at us but she jumped to the right and i jumped to the left and the dog got captured by the dog cachters and every thing was all right

and it was lunch time i was starving and the food was great that shephard would not be coming back! and we had a tan it! ! was ab fab and at the end of the week we saw our moms!

The End

Story by: Tesa, age 9

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