"Comet the Purple Puppie"
by
Maggie

O
nce on a very sunny day I was swimming and I herd a sound.It sounded like this... PPPPUUUURRRRGGGG SPLASH!Now when your brother likes to scare the whits out of you all the you would attomadiclly think it's him.So that what I thought so I turned around and said

"Tom you better come out because I know it's you".

Nothing happened,none,zip,zilch.that when I noticed Tom was still getting sun screen on.(He burns real,real,real easy so he has to have alot of sun screen)

So niw I was scared.I mean wouldn't you be?I looked all around me thinking somebody wanted to be friends ya know.Ididn't see any body.this was get alittle to for me and when I was just about to scream a little purple haed popped up.It had 2 eyes, 2 ears,1 nose,and 1mouth that said"PPPPUUUURRRRGGGG"!This time I didn't here the splash because it stated in front of me and I thought it looked like a purple puppie.

I went to shore and it follow me like a puppie. so when I got out I gasped because it said
"YOU ARE MY NEW MY MASTER TAKE ME TO YOUR HOME AND KEEP ME ,PLEASE".
My brother herd it.
I said"O.K."

So my brother brought my daddy and moma to see it and they all were stuned to see a purple puppie I said to my daddy
"Can I keep it ?"
He said said "are you crazy ,you don't even have to ask!You just go on ahead and put him in the car!

Iscreamed "THANK YOU DADDY"!

When I put it in the car it said
"Thank you for takeing me with you,my name is...Comet."



The End


Story by: Maggie , age 10, USA


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