by
Veronica
long time ago, there was a young girl who lived on the street. Her name was Beatrice. Nobody knew how she had survived for so long with all of the crime and no super heroes to protect the city from all of the crime.She took care of herself every day until she was ten. She was angry that her parents had abandoned her in the city Hullet. Hullet was a very bad city, for the crime was uncontrollable. The city was so poor that they couldn't even have police, a hospital or even a fire station! It was a very bad place to live. Everything was old fashion in Hullet. They had no televisions, radios and computers, they were so behind! The city needed money. The mayor always prayed for money for Hullet. A miracle had to happen to Hullet, and one did happen. In another city called Jabberish, which is very rich! "Honey, look at this! You know Hullet, the city is in big trouble now! I think they need your help!" Mr Korder said worriedly. "Okay honey, I'll go there later on. I'm sure I can find someone there just perfect for the job!" Mrs Korder replied. Oh that's right! I haven't told you who Mr and Mrs Korder are! Mrs Korder is in charge of the super hero headquarters. She looks for people to become super heroes. In fact, she is Wonder Woman! Mr Korder is the Flash and he tells Mrs Korder/ Wonder Woman where there needs to be a super hero. Now back to Mr and Mrs Korder! After a while Mrs Korder/Wonder Woman is in her SUPER HERO SUIT and is flying to Hullet with Mr Korder/Flash and they are soon in Hullet. "Never fear, Wonder Woman is here!" Mrs Korder/Wonder Woman trumpets. "Never fear, the Flash is here!" Mr Korder/Flash trumpets at the same time. But nobody hears them, nobody but Beatrice. "Hello Wonder Woman and Flash," Beatrice croaks," I'm Beatrice and I need food and water! I haven't had food and water for a week!" Wonder Woman hears the voice and runs to Beatrice. She looks at her for a while and thinks deeply. "She's perfect!" Wonder Woman yells in her mind. "Come here Beatrice, follow me." Wonder Woman says. Beatrice looks at her, but she is too weak to walk. Beatrice tries to get up but she finds it impossible! She looks at Wonder Woman and then in a twinkling of an eye Wonder Woman carries Beatrice to a special headquarter underneath the old Pastry Shop. "Here, drink this and eat this," Says Wonder Woman, "you need it." "Thankyou Wonder Woman." Beatrice croaked. "Beatrice, how would you like to be the super hero of this city?" asks Wonder Woman. "I'd love to Wonder Woman!" Beatrice said with happiness. "Great, now you need a name. How about Feeble Woman?" Wonder Woman recommended. "Fine with me!" Beatrice crowed. "Super powers, I don't think you need them. Maybe just one. How about flight?" Wonder Woman questioned. "Alright, whatever you say oh humble one!" Beatrice praised. "Ya, hi ya! Yeow! Wonder Woman, that hurt!" Beatrice grumbled. "That's because you put your leg in the wrong position! You need to have your foot more on the side." Wonder Woman replied. "I find this quite painful punching and kicking this bag!" Beatrice growled. "Well that's what it's going to be like when you attack someone." Wonder Woman replied. So all day long Beatrice worked on her kicks and punches. "Beatrice, do you think you can use blades?" Wonder Woman asked. "I think so Wonder Woman." Beatrice replied. "Well here, try these." Wonder Woman suggested. "Okay, so the sharp ends go into the bad people?" asked Beatrice. "No, not quite right. More like you throw them and they will bring the person to you." Wonder Woman replied. "When are you going to teach me how to fly?" Beatrice asked. "Tomorrow and why do you ask so many questions?" Wonder Woman replied. "I'm a super kid, it's my job." Beatrice laughed. "Ha ha, very funny." Wonder Woman replied. Soon a month had past and Beatrice was ready to concur the city. She said good bye to Wonder Woman and the Flash and she looked at the city from above. "Oh help me! Mister mister! Somebody help me! He took my money! My only money!" cried a lady. "Never fear, Feeble is here!" Feeble Woman trumpeted in delight. ZZZZOOOOMMMM, Feeble Woman blew past the lady's head and threw the blades out. Yikes," cried the robber and ran like mad to Beatrice. "Hi ya! Ya, ya!" Beatrice yelled as she kicked and punched. Then Feeble Woman took the money back to the lady. "Oh thank you Feeble Woman! Thank you!" the lady praised Beatrice. "It's okay!" Feeble Woman replied. Beatrice felt so proud of herself, but the next day something more dangerous then the robber was coming. Something called Koretical. Koretical is a monster that is horrible! It has killed many people! Koretical heard about Feeble Woman and decided to give her a challenge. A fight to DEATH! I'm sure that Feeble Woman must have been too proud to notice a message with the words KORETICA CHALLENGE TO THE DEATH! This monster meant business! The next day "Feeble Woman, we need your help! A monster is raiding our city! Help us!" cried the city. Beatrice heard the calls and flew down to the monster. She grabbed her 'feeblo-master-gun-4000' and she was ready to fight! Oh, I forgot to tell you that Wonder Woman gave Beatrice a gun called 'Feeblo-Master-Gun-4000. Well if any young kids are reading this I'll be cool, I won't tell you the details. Okay, maybe just the not so violent parts. Beatrice kicked, punched, fired her 'Feeblo-Master-Gun-4000' and threw her blades out as fast as possible! She knew that the monster was going down. Kick, kick, punch, block, blades, gun and kick. Yes, that was basically the order of the stuff she did. I guess it's not very pleasant! Then there was a load roar of pain or anger! I don't know how to describe it but it was heard from Africa! The monster was defeated! The city congratulated Feeble Woman and then the money started to roll in! People were coming to see the famous FEEBLE WOMAN! She was a star! There were movies, toys, games and WebPages about her! There were so many things that were about her! Soon Hullet was HUGE! No more run down places in Hullet! It was pure beauty! And if it wasn't for Beatrice's parents, then this would have never happened!
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