"Ghost Ville"
by
Emma

O ne day, an 8 year old boy named John Smith was having a stroll through the old park, when he saw something that caught his eye.It was a dark path hidden amongst the trees. He was just about to wander of, when he realized what time it was. So he ran back home as fast as his legs could carry him, and by the time he got home, he was all puffed out and out of breath. It was a dark path hidden amongst the trees. He was just about to wander of, when he realized what time it was. So he ran back home as fast as his legs could carry him, and by the time he got home, he was all puffed out and out of breath. John woke up in the morning to get a terrible shock. All the windows where ?hat happened?? asked John. ?hey all just disappeared!? cried dad in amazement, he slowly opened the door to the house. Every single thing seemed normal again, he went into the house and checked. ?othing. No sign of the silver chains.? He reported. This must be my lucky day today! Thought John. He decided again tonight that he would go to the park to investigate the path he found early onopen and silver chains where pouring in through the open windows. He jumped out of bed, and out of his bedroom, and ran around the house looking for and empty room. The only room in the house without chains in it was the bathroom. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him, and jumped out of the bathroom window.He didn? need to worry, because he lives in a bungalow. His parents were waiting for him out side. ? w what happened, John?? his mum stammered. ? don? know mum, but I sure wish the chains would go away!? Just as he finished the sentence, all the chains suddenly disappeared. For he did not know that whoever discovers that path will be in charge of all the scary things.One day, an 8 year old boy named John Smith was having a stroll through the old park, when he saw something that caught his eye.It was a dark path hidden amongst the trees. He was just about to wander of, when he realized what time it was. So he ran back home as fast as his le! gs could carry him, and by the time he got home, he was all puffed out and out of breath. It was a dark path hidden amongst the trees. He was just about to wander of, when he realized what time it was. So he ran back home as fast as his legs could carry him, and by the time he got home, he was all puffed out and out of breath. John woke up in the morning to get a terrible shock. All the windows where ?hat happened?? asked John. ?hey all just disappeared!? cried dad in amazement, he slowly opened the door to the house. Every single thing seemed normal again, he went into the house and checked. ?othing. No sign of the silver chains.? He reported. This must be my lucky day today! Thought John. He decided again tonight that he would go to the park to investigate the path he found early onopen and silver chains where pouring in through the open windows. He jumped out of bed, and out of his bedroom, and ran around the house looking for and empty room. The only room in the house without chains in it was the bathroom. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him, and jumped out of the bathroom window.He didn? need to worry, because he lives in a bungalow. His parents were waiting for him out side. ? w what happened, John?? his mum stammered. ? don? know mum, but I sure wish the chains would go away!? Just as he finished the sentence, all the chains suddenly disappeared. For he did not know that whoever discovers that path will be in charge of all the scary things.John woke up in the morning to get a terrible shock. All the windows where open and silver chains where pouring in through the open windows. He jumped out of bed, and out of his bedroom, and ran around the house looking for and empty room. The only room in the house without chains in it was the bathroom. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him, and jumped out of the bathroom window.He didn? need to worry, because he lives in a bungalow. His parents were waiting for him out side. ? w what happened, John?? his mum stammered. ? don? know mum, but I sur! e wish t he chains would go away!? Just as he finished the sentence, all the chains suddenly disappeared. For he did not know that whoever discovers that path will be in charge of all the scary things.?hat happened?? asked John. ?hey all just disappeared!? cried dad in amazement, he slowly opened the door to the house. Every single thing seemed normal again, he went into the house and checked. ?othing. No sign of the silver chains.? He reported. This must be my lucky day today! Thought John. He decided again tonight that he would go to the park to investigate the path he found early on.He walked over to the park that night, and looked around to see if anyone was spying on him. He went through the path slowly carrying his torch just in case. He came across a sign saying:
Ghost Ville
100 yards on the right path
Ends Ville
150 yards on the left path

He decided to take the rHe beamed his torch on the path as he walked. A skull protruding on the path nearly scared him out of his skin. He walked on another 5 minutes and saw a grave yard on the left hand side, on the right side was another graveyard. Some of the graves looked fresh, some look a thousand years old and some have been knocked over.He walked for another 2 minutes and came across another sign saying:

Welcome to Ghost Ville, John Smith
Population:
Ghosts: 1564
Zombies: 2546
Vampires:1324
Headless Knights: 2761
That gave him a fright. ?ow do they know my name?? he asked himself. He looked around, but all he saw, was an old shack. He stared at it and burst out in laugher. There was a handle on the door of the shack, but he did not know that. ?ho? laughing?!? asked a voice. John froze, and looked around. It was the handle! He just stared at it astonished. ?hat are you looking at? The handle asked him, ?hhh, you must be John Smith, our leader!?e looked around, but all he saw, was an old shack. He stared at it and burst out in laugher. There was a handle on the door of the shack, but he did not know that. ?ho? laughing?!? asked a voice. John froze, and looked around. It was the handle! He just stared at it astonished. ?hat are you looking at? The handle asked him, ?hhh, you must be John Smith, our leader!?



The End


Story by: Emma, age 10, England

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