"Corte Sierra is Getting Brainwashed"
by
Madeline

O
ne hot, summer Monday, four friends were playing at recess when they saw something fling in the air. It was a car. They went to hide because they thought it was going to fall on them but it didn’t. The next day the girls went to school. They saw beams of blue lines shooting out of the car. The beams would pick students up into the air and into the clouds. When they came back, they wouldn’t know anything. The four friends, Ciara, Tatum, Kylie, Madeline knew what it was. “It is Pota. Ciara said. “I know, said Kylie. They had to stop the Pota. When they were running home, they noticed that the Pota had even brainwashed some of the teachers! “We have to stop this., said Tatum. So they each ran home to their own house and quickly dressed into their spy clothes. They met at the bus stop. Kylie didn’t have her spy clothes on. Madeline asked, “Why don’t you have your spy clothes on? “I can’t find them. Kylie said. So the four girls went to Kylie’s house and started looking for Kylie’s spy clothes. Kylie asked her mom “Where are my spy clothes? Her mom’s reply was, “I put them in the dryer because they were wet. So Kylie pulled them out of the dryer and put them on even though they were wet. When they got back to the bus stop, the bus had all ready left. So they waited for one hour until the bus came back around. The bus took them strait to school. They got out quickly and went right to where the Pota was. The Pota was not there. The four girls were so tired, so they went to get a soda. The Pota was there! The girls hid, because if the the Pota saw them her would brainwash them too. When the four girls were walking quietly to the Pota’s room to capture him, they saw his brainwasher parked in the coutyard. They ran as fast as they could. It was hard to get to the brainwasher because there was lots of vines in the school coutyard. When the four girls got to it they were so happy that they found Pota’s brainwasher. When Tatum tried to open it, it wouldn’t budge. ! Tatum sa id to her friends “It’s locked. When they saw the Pota walking to get into his brainwasher machine through the craks in the vines, they ran behind the soda machine and hid. They watched Pota from behind the soda machine. When Pota took off they came out from behind the soda machine. The next day they came early to school so they could see Pota land. That day when Pota landed his keys fell out of his pocket. The four friends went again to see if Pota dropped anything. There were the keys lying on the ground. Madeline said “Hey guys look what I found, the keys. The four girls all shouted. They were so happy they found the keys. The four friends unlocked the brainwasher and got in and started to unbrainwash the school. When Pota heard the noise he came running out of the office and went straight to the courtyard. The brainwasher was not there! Pota looked everywhere while the girls finished unbrainwashing the entire school. When the girls where done unbrainwashing the school, they got a parashoot from out of the back of the brainwasher. They turned the brainwasher off and let it fall to the ground and break into tiny pieces. While the girls parashooted down, Madeline called the police to come and arrest Pota. Pota was hard to get in the car because he kicked and yelled at the police, but the police finally got him in. The four friends had a nice day at school.



The End


Story by: Madeline, age 8

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