colin's "my birthday"

In this story,

is "sun ",

is "cake",

is "fish",

is "birthdayhat", and

is "game".

My Birthday is today my birthday is May,23 I got a

and a

and we ate

and the

was so bright that you can't even see.my birtday was at my sisters house.and when sun went down it was 700pm we had to leave at 10.00pm my birtday began at 200pm it end at 10.00pm we had lots of fun at my birtday party. and we went back home then my mom said surprise then it was a

think you mom.

The End

Story by: colin, age 9