"The Best Day Ever"
by
Manuel

W
ow!This is the best day ever.Have you ever had a very good day ?I have and I'm going to tell you how grea it was.
One sunny day my sister said,"Wakeup we'regoing to Six flags"! I took a bath and put on my clothes as fast as I could.I was so glad.I haven't gone to Six Flag's sinceIwas seven.We stopped at some gas stations for food on the way.I fell asleep a few times because I was bored.When I woke up from one of my naps I saw the tops of some rides.I could tell we were almost there.Then my sister yelled,"We're here we're here."We had to pay five dollars to park at a parking lot.We had to cross a bridge.
When we paid to enter we went inside.Our first ride was The Deungon Drop.It was so scary that I screamed to the top of my lungs.Our next ride was The Viper.The Viper is the most coolest ride ever!Our last ride was The Scale.First it weighed us, and the heaviest side started moving the other side.
while we were going home I saw a lot of firework stores.I was feeling sleepy and tired.My sister made fun of me because I slept on the way to Six Flags and on the way back.When we got home I told my parents how funit was.My dad told me that I needed sleep.then my sister told him that I had enough sleep.I just fell pn my bed and closed my eyes.



The End


 

Story by: Manuel, age 10

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