"The Best Birthday Ever"
by
Ciara

C
ool!Today is my brithday and were going to gattie town to eat pizza. This is my birthday and I get to chose gattie town.
We got in the car and we drove off.I fell asleep. When we got there I shot up! I said "mom slow down heres aparking place right here". We should park here because it's closer to the door.My mom brings gifts in for me. I ask my mom whats in the bags?"I can't tell you"my mom said. I can't wait to get in because my family and friends are going to be there.
We walked in the door we played to 10:00.We went to the birthday room.Mrs.Feona did a few tricks and we got slushys then we got free pizza I got sauge because it's my favorite pizza.My best friend got peporony because that's her favorite not mine.After we ate we went in the play room first all the kids get free cards that has $3.79 dollars on it. Before we went in the game room Mrs.Feona did magic tricks my favorite one is the one with the eraser she changed the colors on it. My best friend likes the bird because hes funny because he turns his head and dose funny things like ignoring the lady.He is also called a parrot.
When the laddy gave us the card the big kids rode the bumper car and the little kids rode the horses that they think is fun.I got a bingo on the twirl game.I also got lots of stuff I"ll name one a note book that has zebra skin on it.Me and my friend shared tickets she got 300 hundred to.We both got lots of furry books.
We got in the car and we drove off. I had the best 9th brithday ever.I can't wait until my 10th brithday comes.



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Story by: Ciara, age 9

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