"Vacation in Atlanta"
by
Brea

W
ow !I went on a vacation and it was cool.Me and my cousin went on a vacation on July 4, 2004 in Atlanta, Georgia.I had fun because when I got there I went swimming and I never got hurt or got drowned.I was always in the tree house playing games or writing in my diary,too.
I like to do fun things. It makes me feel like I 'm still 5 or 4 or like I'm being my age.My auntie always spoils me and gave everything I wanted. She always told me to believe in what I do and I did. My auntie was always taking me everywhere so I could have a little fun.But there's one problem I already was having fun.
We are a great family and we're nice.We do things for other people and sometimes peoples do thing for us.But when I was on my trip my cousin made a remark to my other cousin and I didn ' t like it because I thought it was disrespectful. So I made a comment.
So I' m telling you this now do not ever let anyone disrespect you.Because on my trip to Georgia my feelings were hurt because what she said about me. I felt like she was running over me so I'm telling you do not let anyone run over you.
My trip was mostly good, though. I had fun with my Aunt, I played all day long, and my family learned that I needed to be respected.
I can't wait to go back.



The End


 

Story by: Brea, age 10

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