"The Big Avalanche"
by
Denissa

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here were three guys. Their names were Charlie, Michelle and Jesse. They were hiking on snowy mountains. They didn't know what caused a avalanche. Jesse was laughing and Charlie was singing. Then they heard something. But then it stopped. They stopped somewhere and put their tents. Then they slept there.

The next morning they were laughing very loudly. Then they heard that noise again. They saw a big white cloud rushing down the mountain. They started running. When they were running they fell in a hole and where safe. When the avalanche was gone they got out of the hole. They started running towards their cars. They got in the cars and went home. At work they told everyone and the people were scared and surprised.



The End


 

Story by: Denissa, age 10

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