"popular girl in year 11"
by
juicy

I
n Darland high school there was the school popular girl she was in year 11 her name was Lola Rose she was always smart and pretty for school all the boys fancied her everyone was always around her i think that annoyed her but she had loads of friends but one day a new girl was brought in to year11 her name sarah evans she was even prettier than lola rose and when sarah came in the playground everyone made friends with her and then lola was on her own because her friends have gone to make friends with sarah and then all the boys had gone off lola and went on to sarah and lola said to sarah your ugly your not as half as pretty as me and all the people were shouting lola rose is ugly because they all thought sarah was pretty but it all ended in a fight and lola got excluded and sarah was going out with a lad called ewan and on valentines day in school they both gave each other a rose but on valentines night year 11 had a prom and sarah came in a black diamond ball gown and when they were all dancing ewan gave sarah a kiss underneath the disco ball and everyone was clapping and they had the last dance together
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Story by: juicy, age 11, UK

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