Quinton's "The Christmas I Saved"

In this story, is "elves", is "beam",
is "blizzard", is "Christmas", and is "chip".

Hello my name is Quinton Cluck and I have a story to tell you about last .We were all happy because was in a week. My mom went shopping while my dad put the decorations up. For some reason, this whole thing didn't seem right. I got a feeling about so I ran up to my room to think what it could be, but the weird part was when I said, " Holiday", time froze. Not me, of course, but everything else. When I started walking there was a blue around me. It felt like it was pulling me in every direction. Then, I was gone. When it was over I was in snow .I was also in a metal suit - not like armor - it was warm. Suddenly, I knew what to do. I had to go to Santa's house. To bad though, I didn't know where to go, so I looked around until I found a city named Santa Ville. It's not the right place but it should give me a clue. And it did. On the ground it looked like a video game but littler. Also, it had an evil elf on it. So I took i! t and I looked in every house. Then I saw something. In a house there was a plot for the to take over . So I looked at the map right next to the plot and was on my way. While I was walking I thought how did I get picked to save , I'm only a kid? The was gone - the map says to go on Ice Road. To my surprise it was real ice so I slid down. Finally, I was there. I went in the window. I hid by some boxes. Then, an elf saw me. " Intruder," he said. Then I knew what the was, a device to control the good so I had to get the batteries out. I used a magnet on all the . The s all fell out. Then I saw the head elf so I said words like at the beginning "cage". Then he was trapped and every thing was normal again.



The End


 

Story by: Quinton, age 10

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