Timothy's "The Falling Star"
In this story,
is "balconey",
is "teliscope",
is "meter star",
is "box",
and
is "door".
Once apon a time there was a man named Bill. He had two
kid's named Nick and Raj. Bill did not let Nick and Raj do much
because they got in trouble a lot. Nick and Raj complained a
lot. A
came in the mail. Bill opened the
to get it. Bill opened the
, there inside was
a ticket for a free trip to the Bahama Islands. They decided
to to Bahama Islands. They went to a hotel. There was a
and a
on the
. They started to
look though the
. They saw a
falling
star coming toward them. They paniced. It was going to hit in
a matter of seconds. They ran to the bath room. They waited,
and waited, and waited. They looked outside and saw a rock on
fire. They found out that it burned up in the atmisspher. They
put out the fire and kept the meter rock. Nick and Raj did not
complaine. They just thanked there dad for the rock.
The End
Story by: Timothy, age 11