Mimi's "my first telescope"

In this story, is "telescope",
is "mail", and is "door".

I ,ve always wanted a really bad every since I was in 2nd grade .
But on my birthday that all changed around. I told my dad that I wanted
the and I was pretty sure I was going to get it .It's the day of my
birthday and I haven't seen that big box with the yet.
I was cutting my cake when I heard a on the door. We all rushed to the
, as my so called friend Ashley splats the cake in my face. In the end I
saw the sitting in my lap while I scraped the cake off my face, and
my Mom and Dad are singing HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.

The End

Story by: Mimi, age 10