Brandi's "The Planet Called
Ann"
In this story,
is "balcony",
is "telescope",
is "new (found) planet",
is "box",
and
is "door".
Once there was a little girl named Ann that lived in Arizona
. One day the doorbell rang so Ann took the
left
at at her
and went to open it .When she look inside
she found a
. She had her dad help her put
it up .whan she was doon they put on her
for
days and days she wished to find a
.But soon Ann stoped
looking for a
.But one day she thought she
had seen a planet so she got her
and looked .When
she look she was right it was a
. So she called the
star and planet show and they named the
after
her . Ann was so happy she could not belive her eyes ,her own
.After that every night she looked for her
.Ann got older and soon did not care for
looking at the
but she knows it's there and
that it's hers .
The End
Story by: Brandi, age 11