"Donald and the golden ring"
by
Max

I
n an old castle in the north of England, there lived a ghost. His name was Donald. Donald was very good at frightening people. Every night at midnight he walked round his castle. Then he went to the hotel in town and frightened the tourists and their children.

But one night , something happened. When Donald came out of the castle, he saw beautiful ghost-girl. She had blond hair and red eyes.

Donald said: "Wow".

He want to surprise her and put a ring on her beautiful finger. That was a big mistake from Donald, because a ghost-rule says: "You must not put a ring on another ghosts finger!"


From this day on Donald had to hang on a chain for 2534 years in the cellar of the old castle. His girlfriend never came back. Donald felt very sad.



The End


 

Story by: Max, age 12

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