Chloe's "The Unknown Galaxy"

In this story, is "stargazing deck", is "super telescope",
and is "unknown galaxy".

Once there was a little girl named Star. One evening Star was out on the , looking through her , when suddenly she discovered a button on the side of the . It was navy blue with turquoise swirls. The swirls seemed to be moving. Star pressed the button and all of a sudden she was sucked into an . When she landed, Star knew she wasn't at home anymore. In fact, she wasn't even sure she was on earth anymore.

A few minutes later someone came over to her. He looked just like a normal person. "Hello," said Star. "Who are you?" "My name is Hynni."
"I'm Star," said Star. "Welcome," said the thing. "To planet Jadu, the . Our people our called lofeos. Shall I show you around?" "Sure," said Star. So he led Star off.

They came to a crater. They jumped in. There was about two hundred lofeos there. Then they climbed out. After they had visited a feww craters, Hynni said, "Well, I guess you'd better go. If you pay ten cents. Do you have that?"
"Oh I think so," said Star. She dug a dime out of her pocket. "Here." She gave it to him. "Good-bye!" said Hynni.
He waved to her as she whirled back to earth. When she got back, Star said, "that was a very exciting adventure."

The End

Story by: Chloe, age 8, Canada

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