Joanna's "Two Plans"

In this story, is "Bush", is "Present ",
is "Peter",and is "House "

is very happy. Today is his birthday, he is going to hold a birthday party in his . He is very excited and wants to go inviting his friends in the early morning while his mother bakes cake and cooks for the party.

On the way to Lily's , passing by a . He hears some sounds behind the and he becomes scare of it. But, he remembers that today is his birthday and he's going to be 9, he shouldn't be a coward anymore.

hides behind a tree and decides to see what is going to happen. Suddenly, he hears some voices. He recognize the voices! They are James the bad fox and Harsh the evil wolf. They are planning something, he knows. They always disturbing others in this jungle and everyone afraid of them.

hears with full of attention. Ah, the guys are planning to ruin his birthday-party. He hears them want to steal the cake and put in drug and take off the ballons and ribbons.

becomes very angry of it. He wants to stop this plan, but he doesn't know how. So, he walks to Lily's . Lily is a clever rabbit. She knows everything because she likes to study. is going to ask her how to stop this plan.

When arriving Lily's , she's studing hard under a shaddy tree. doesn't want to disturb Lily at first, but Lily catches the sight of him and asked him what had happened on him that make him so pale!

honestly tell her what he had heard from James and Harsh. He's unhappy about it. Lily comforts him and trying to think ideas to ruined these frauds' plan. Then she think about the cake. She suddenly jumps up, saying that she has ideas. She wispered something in 's ear. becomes bright again after hearing the plans.

Than, he goes on inviting Deerie, Pattie, Sally, John, Chia-chia and Bobo. He told everyone about Lily's plan and all of them agree to help in.

arrived his at about 12.00 noon. He passing by the again. This time, he hears the voices of the two guys again. They agree to gather in front of 's , at 4.00 p.m., just the time the party started.

Arriving at home, told his mother, Mrs Jane. She becomes very worry but comforts her and tells her Lily's plan.

That afternoon, when James and Harsh arrive, they saw the is empty without people. They just go in and saw the cake on the table. Before they put the drug, they eat it. Well, it taste good! After a few moments, they felt too heavy to walk. They have a good sleep on the comfortable bed. They plan to rest for a while but they can't help it. They fall sleep.

Then, all the friends of enter the room and carry the big two eveil animals to a river and throw them down. Then, they returned to the and celebrate 's 9th birthday.

Well, do you know what about the two James and Harsh? When they wake up, they are already in a cage of zoo and amazing to see many strangers around them.

Ha ... ...

   

The End


Story by: Joanna, age 14, Malaysia

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