"The Hunting Trip"
by
Stanley

hen me and Tanner went hunting in the marsh, we stayed there for three hours in my pirogue we saw a six point buck. I loaded my gun and shot. I hit him and Tanner was happy.

We got out of the pirogue. We went to look for him. We followed the blood. We found the deer and I pick him up. He was a monster. We dragged him to the pirogue and we bearly had enough room in the perog.

We kept on going and in about two hours and we saw a doe. Tanner pick the gun and shot. He kill it we dragged him to the pirogue. We put him on the other deer. We went home.

The End

Story by: Stanley, age 9