"Storm force 10"
by
Mike


s the queue shortened for the new ride at Drayton Manor Park "Storm force 10" Tony began to quaver he looked nervously at his partners who he would be with in his boat.

"Hello," he said nervously to a soaking wet boy, "Oh hi I've been on this ride already," the boy said in a very laid back tone. "Great!" he said shaking.

When it was his turn he got into the boat and swallowed bravely, "Here goes," he uttered to himself. The shutter closed behind his boat, he waited, a wax model said, "Steady as she goes!" and the boat went down the first drop when it finished Tony yelled at the top of his voice,"YIPPEE!" The other boy told him that they were going backwards next!

When they got to the top he felt the boat tipping backwards he closed his eyes when he opened the a wave of cold water fell on him! When he wiped his eyes dry he was totally soaked! After a while they got to the final drop the highest one! The boat tipped forward he got a fuuny feeling inside himself that made him yell "WAHOO!" all the way down when he got of the ride he said lets do that again...

  

The End


Story by: Mike, age 11, England

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