by
Robert
couple of Hallowens ago me and my friend were walking down the street collecting candy as usual. But when we had walked around town 1 whole time my friend spotted a house that we hadn't gotten candy from yet. When we knocked on the door there was a low moan and the door literally flew right off its hinges and a man with a slight hump on his back stepped out holding a bag that looked like it had a bloody hand in it (actually it was a bloody hand but we didn't know that yet). My friend and I said "Trickor' treat" but he just looked at us with a puzzled look on his face. We said "Trickor'treat" again but he just looked at us with that same confused face. He made a snorting noise. Then he held out his hand and made a gesture with his hands that we thought meant "come in." We accepted and went inside.Inside there was a tall man that looked like he was just frightened out of his wits because his face was so pale. He also looked very serious. He pointed us to a chair and when we sat down we felt a mysterious darkness pass over us. I began to feel whoozy and I think my friend was too because he gave me the imppresion that he was about to throw up. Then for a second I considered the possability that this house might, just might be haunted. I shook that thought off even though deep down I knew this house was haunted. I closed my eyes and an hour later I opened them to find myself in something like a maze and laying next to me was my friend. I woke him up and he looked in some way the same that I do when I wake up early on a school day. I turned my head to the opposite side of the bed and saw the tall pale man sitting there. And for the first time I saw the inside of his mouth and what I saw is what I was dreading to see, Fangs!!. "You're a vampire I screamed" He smiled an awkward smile and said "correct" and then he said "vhat are you doing in my house!" and I just sat there staring too frightened to speak and then the vampire said "Don't vorry I von't bite YOUR neck" then the vampire laughed. I looked back at my friend and realized why he was so pale. It was because the vampire had sucked his blood!!! "YOU SUCKED HIS BLOOD!!!!" I screamed. The Vampire laughed again. But this laugh was even more ghoulish than the last. He gave me a funny look. I suddenly realized what he was now staring at. On the last house that me and my friend went to somebody gave us candy garlic and I was once reading a legend about vampires (right now it's not a legend it's true) and it said that vampires were repelled by garlic. But just then the man with the hump came running up to the vampire screaming "Master master." But the vampire just said "not now Igore" But the hunchback just whined out "But it's important master" but the vampire just said, now in a more angry tone " not now Igore" and that was the beginning to my plan of getting out of the house. That started up an argument between Igore and the vampire.While they were arguing I crept out of the bed the vampire was keeping me and my friend in. I then jogged over to where Igor came in. And right there was the room where I got into the whole situation. I ran over to the chair, kicked it hard (because I was angry about the thing that happened to my friend) and then ran straight out the door. When I was safely at the street I turned around to take one last glance at the house but it wasn't there!! I heard someone call my name. It was my friend! I ran over to him and hugged him. But just then I began to think about how the house dissapeared. And if I ever find out how it dissapeared, well that will be a DIFFERENT story.
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