Hannah's "A day at the zoo"

In this story, is "i am wearing", is "i will eat",
is "i will see", is " rest here", and is "i like this".

I woke up exited. It was my birthday. I was going to be five. I pulled on my dungeries.

I rushed downstairs.
My Family were waiting for me. "Happy Birthday to you," they sang, "Happy Birthday to you,happy Birthday dear celeste Happ Birthday to you." I grinned happily. We were going to go to the zoo first then I would open my presents. i could barely wait to open them.


Soon we arived at the zoo.we paid and made our way towards the first animals.Wow, I thought. I had never been to the zoo there were animals everywhere, girraffes, elephants, zebras, hippos, monkeys and loads of birds.

we walked around slowly looking at the animals.I sat down on a bench.
We turned a corner and saw a place to eat. I was hungry. I ate a burger it was tasty.

Next we went to a place where we could touch some animals.
Then it was time to go home. I was sad. but then I remembered my presents. I was happy again.


When we got home I opended my presents. I had got, some pens, 3 cuddly toys, some different games, some cars, a ball, and a talking doll. After that I ate sausages and mashed potato. Then it was time for bed.

But it wasn't over yet I still had a party with my friends tommorow. Goodnight.

  

The End


Story by: Hannah, age 11, England

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