"The carp"
Story by Louise , for Kaaya Japan

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Last week my friend bought a fish at the pet shop it was a carp. The fish was so small it could fit in her swimming pool. The swimming pool was filled with which was filled water with chlorine in it. It was a magical carp. If it ate too much it would grow as big as a house.

The next morning Emma feed it too much food. The carp grew very big. Emma said

'I shouldn't feed it too much.'

When her mum found out she screamed at Emma and said,

'Go to your room now!' 

Emma went to her room and said

'I just fed it too much food '.

After five minutes her mum  came and said,

'Emma it doesn't matter, we can buy another carp.'

' But I like this carp', said Emma.

After the night was gone, Emma and her mum went shopping and bought the same kind of fish at the pet shop. When Emma got home she was really happy. This time she knew how to look after her pet. 


  

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Story by: Louise, age 8, Australia

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